Friday, October 8, 2010

Dreams

me likes flowers on the roadside,
me likes my smile reflected in my eyes.
me likes the wind billowing through my clothes,
and touching the water as the stream softly flows.

i like the sunshine on my neck,
i like the ripples as the air touches the lake.
i like to fly on the sky so high,
wishing the mundane world goodbye.

me wants to feel snowflakes on my tongue,
me wants to sing loud songs yet unsung.
me wants to lie down; count the stars
or smile to the sun as do the flowers.

i want to feel the touch of silence.
i want to believe in things that don't make sense.
i want to hold hands with my imaginary friend
and wish our good times never have to end.

we all have lives which are dreams,
pictures we want to paint on the frames
of our lives; looking forever for a moment
which could fill us with wonderment.

stop bugging me...me wants to dream awhile more...

13 comments:

Jingle said...

I love flowers, I love water, smiles, dreams...
your poem is very elegant and pleasant to read.
Cheers!

Jingle said...

Thank you for the support, friend.
welcome to our party any time.
BEST!

Anonymous said...

a very beautiful poem Reetam. truly beautiful.

hope you always gather joy from small, small things in life.

Anonymous said...

a very beautiful poem Reetam. truly beautiful.

hope you always gather joy from small, small things in life.

trisha
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/

Jingle said...

support us by visiting a few poets near your entry.
thanks for the contribution…

here is one of mine:
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/04/what-can-you-see/

reetam said...

glad you like the poem and thanks for visiting :)

liv2write2day said...

Something childlike yet deep about the narrator(s) of this poem.

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/06/thursday-poets-rally-week-30/

welcome to Poets Rally week 30,
let me know if you have a poem ready,
do nothing otherwise.
Thanks for the support.

dhitzunako said...

"Me wants..."
I usually use that words to express my "selfishness" of wanting to be spoiled...

Very lovely poem.
Do we all like dreaming? :)

JamieDedes said...

Dream on. Just wonderful. Love your header too.

I also wanted to leave a comment on your award acceptance, but couldn't see where to post it. So, congrats on that on your lovely acceptance poem. Nice work ... Nice work here too. Thanks.

Enjoy Rally visits and visitors. Have a good weekend.

My Rally poem is here:
http://musingbymoonlight.com/2010/10/07/communing-with-snake/

Kristen Haskell said...

I also enjoy living in that space you just described so beautifully.

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/happy-birthday-wishes-to-talon/

help visit Talon to wish her a happy birthday today,
Thanks!

megzone said...

lol :D
loved the last line the most :D
we all love to dream dont we :D
awesome poem dear :)

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