Monday, October 4, 2010

MAGNETS AND MIRACLES (part II)

I want to touch a song
of snow capped mountains,
of roads winding and long,
and crystal clear fountains.

I want to write a lay
that sings of a dreamy sunset,
walking hand in hand on a rainy day,
and of people i've never met.

I want to pen a poem
about really mundane things,
of bread baking in the oven
and mittens on cold winter evenings.

I want to be a picture
of fluffy white clouds
lazing in the skies of summer,
and of songs bereft of doubt.

I want to be a magician,
wreathe spells in blue ink on white paper
that will give this dream a reason
to go on and on and on forever....

9 comments:

Jingle said...

your desires are lovely and positive,
how cool to want to do ao many beautiful things...
lovely poem,
well delivered job.

Amanda said...

Loved the last stanza so much...thanks for writing this beautiful poem and for linking with Potluck...I enjoyed the read x

sillyfrogsusan said...

This speaks to me, and I believe all writers.
We wish to be heard...We want to be remembered :-)
Welcome to Potluck!

liv2write2day said...

Beautifully done...we've had 4 days of rain now and I relate to what you've written.
Victoria

reetam said...

glad you liked the poem, and thanks a ton for visiting... :)

Jingle said...

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/08/the-perfect-poet-award-4-poets-rally-week-30/

the perfect poet award for you...
you can still attend rally week 30.

JamieDedes said...

Am vicariously enjoying your rain. We're having a bit of a heat-spell where I am.

This is well done. I particularly appreciated the last stanza, which I think could actually stand on its own as a poem in itself.

Thanks for posting and sharing.

Jingle said...

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/09/mountains-are-high/

take the awards

Thanks a lot!
have fun!

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/23/6244/

Thanks a lot for the support to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I could not always find time to show how much we appreciate your support, here, three awards for you, hope to see you in of week 7, our theme is love and romance. Happy Monday, Happy Blogging! xxx

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