Does it rain in your dream tonight,
or do you tread snow?
And if the road is there no more
would you know where to go?
Does the sunset shine on your eyes
or glow behind your back?
Will you touch roadside flowers,
fill the colours they lack?
Will you be my blurry sky
when it rains and rains
will you let me hold your hand
as we both go insane...
Does it hurt every time you smile
across tear stained glass?
Whenever you turn back and wave
at the days that have passed?
Image Courtesy - Voices of a Distant Star, by Makoto Shinkai.
7 comments:
This is amazing, I had to read it few times and I'm sure will do it other few .. the start Does it rain in your dream tonight ...what a beautiful sentence! I truly like it, very talented writing! I'd even ask you if I can include it to my blog, I have page called =scent of other hearts=, where I have the very favorite poems I've read up to now in the blog world and I'd like to have yours there too,/of course it will link back to your page/ please let me know if that's ok! You made my day with this poem! Bravo!
I’d like to wish you a Merry Christmas and to say thank you for the support to Jingle Poetry, with you standing beside us, we are able to continue our efforts by providing the platform for poets who share and encourage…BEST wishes for the year 2011…your poetry has enlightened our community and made us smile.
Blessings fly your way, Happy Holidays!
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Hope to see you on Sunday Poetry Potluck again, let me know if you have questions..old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome..
week 15 theme: reflections, interpretations, and musings.
Take care!
Blaga is right. You are very talent and that one line is the first of many clues. Wonderful poem. So pleased that have have linked with Poetry Potluck. I hope you enjoy your visits and visitors. Be patient. Sometime is takes awhile to build. We all end up with many site to visit. When you visit sites, most bloggers will in turn visit you.
If you haven't visited Blaga yet. You must. She is so talented and warm and has a wonderful ethic. You will enjoy her.
My site is:
http://musingbymoonlight.com/
I'll be back for more. Promise.
Poem on ...
@jamie. thanks a lot. it feels lovely if someone enjoysreadong what i write.
@blaga. sure you can. i'll be honoured. i couldn't go through your blog in detail because its troublesome from my cell (limited bandwidth on my plan) but i really enjoyed what i read. will come back for more pretty soon :)
Here is the link to where I featured your poem! Once again thank you! Happy holidays!
"Will you touch roadside flowers,
fill the colours they lack?"...
i love this one!:)
Lovely composition Reetham. flowing like a melody in a dream . calls out to be read and remembered like a sweet ache .
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